Friday, 13 March 2015

PATNA EXPRESS




Is film ke sabhi patra aur ghatnaye kalpanik hai,iska kisi bhi jeewet wyakti se koi bhi samband ni hai, agar aisa hua to isse hm sirf ek sayoog kahenge.....

CIGRATE IS INJURIOUS TO HEALTH

CAST: PRAMOD YADAV(GOLU), TRIPTI RATHORE(AASNA), VIVEK UNIYAL(VIVEK),
SACHIN RATURI(SACHIN), APOORVA(PRIYA), SANDHIYA(MEGHNA), NEERAJ(FATHER)
SONG: COPYRIGHT
LYRICS: JAVED AKTAR, ABHIJEET BHATACHARYA
STORY: DEEPAK,VIVEK,ANUBHAV

DIRECTED BY: DEEPAK, VIVEK

PATNA EXPRESS

BEFORE 5 YEARS....



yu to zindagi ke 16 sal jee chuka tha,lekin zindagi to meri us din shuru hui thi.
Us din pehli bar aasman se barf ko girte dekha , aur barf me tairti hui ek pari ko dekha tha.

Teri aankhon ki namkeen mastiya,
teri hasi ki beparwah gustakhiya,
nahi bhulunga main ,
jab tak hai jaan ,jab tak hai jaan ,jab tak hai jaan.

Us din aakash inst. ke liye main train pakadne gaya magar us din meri mulakat hui , ek ladki anjani si, pagli si deewani si.
Pehli nazar me aisa jaadu kar diya ,galti se mai uske piche dusri train me baith gaya.

Ticket kharid ke,
betha seat pe ,
nikal na jaaye kahi patna express.

Maine pakdi train raiwala se ,dehradun Ke liye,
magar pahuch gaya us pari ki jannat me.

Jab TT aaya to meri fathi aise ,
ki ubhre jwalamukhi jaise....

TT jaise aaya maine usko chum liya,
TT dekh ke sharmaya, aur patli gali se nikal liya .

jab main use chum ke hatha to wo sharma gayi,
Ye hamare pyar ki shuruaat thi.

Phir maine us se apni harkat ke liye mafi maangi.
Phir usne sharma ke kaha koi baat nahi , “IT'S OK”.

Maine uska naam pucha , usne haskar jawab diya Ashnaa,
phir usne mera naam pucha fir maine haskar kaha
“GOLU” naam to suna hi hoga.....

Fir humne ek dusre ke bare me jan ne ki koshish ki,
uske sath waqt kaise gujra itna haseen ki mujhe pata hi ni chala ki patna kab aa gaya .
Fir usne mujhse kaha ki mera station aa gaya hai .
Man me milne ki khushi thi ,
aur bichadne ka double gum tha.

Tu bichdan , bichdan.......
bichde to ji na payenge …..

hum alag ho gaye , fir mujhe ye mehsuss hua aur mere dil se aawaj ayee ki yahi hai wo ladki jiska intezar tha , aur main uske piche nikal pada ..

saat station paar main tere piche piche aa gaya....

uske saath uska colonel baap bhi tha ,
maine uske ghar tk uska pichaa kiya ,
fir wo ghar ke andar chali gayi....

ab wo to apne ghar chali gayi ,
aur mai kahan rahunga aur fir uske chakar me raat bhar footpath pe soya..

agle din jb subha uth kr balcony pe ayi
to lagi jaise pari dharti pe utar ayi...

fir maine wahan se dekha ki usse milne ek ladka aya hai
wo usse milne niche aaye, aur aate hi uske gale lag gayee

ye dekh golu ki sasse tham gaye .
Usee samaj ni aa rha tha ye kya ho rha hai !!!

aur akhir golu usee ek hassenn khab samajkr bhul gya
aur wapas aa gya ..
dono k rastee alag ho gyee


par zindagi ka kya bharosa kis mood par un ko phir milla dee



5 years later

golu: papa main kal tracking ke liye shimla jaa raha hu.
Papa(N): tum waha kyon jana chahte ho? kya chahte ho tum apni life se?
golu:papa raftar....... mai udna chahta hu,dodna chahta hu, girna bhi chahta hu, bas rukna nhi chahta hu papaaa....
papa; jo mann kare vo karo, bas mere bete ka khyal rakhna.
( waha se chala jata hai.)


golu apne dosto k saat trek k liye nikal jata hai..

scene {station me}

golu: vivek salee q pita hai itna, nashee me kabi kuch ho gya to,ab bhi kuch ni bigda hai?
Vivek:yar tu mujhe acchi tarah janta hai me marne k lia ni pita, pine k lia marta hu...
sachin: bhai logo train ka time ho gaya..chalo''

golu:tum chalo m aata hu..

{jaise train jane wali hote hai waise hi}

ek ladki bhagte-bhagte aaye ,
golu ko vishwas ni hua assna hi hai wo ladki.
Phir as usual jaise aur prem kahaniyo me hota hai
golu ne haat diya aur wo train me aa gaye....

golu: yaad ayaa?
Aasna:kya ?
Golu: hm 5 saal pehle patna express me mile thee, mere pass ticket ni tha......
Aasna: haa lekin tumne apna naam kya bataya tha?
Golu: aasna ,tumhe mera naam yaad ni ?
Aasna: ni .
Golu: golu nam to suna hi ni hoga..
Aasna: haste-haste pehle kbhi ni suna par ab sun chuke.
Golu: tum kaha ja rhe ho?
Aasna: me shimla vaccation spend karne ,AUR TUM
Golu: me apne dosto k saath shimla trekking karne.
Aasna: woh! That great yaar..
Golu: why don't you join us?
Aasna: mere friends bhi hai mere saath!
Golu: oh don't worry about that,we all will have a great fun together.
Aasna : ok !!

{compartment me}
sab ek dusre se baat krte hai..

priya: sachin tum itne tensed q lag rhe ho?
Vivek: jb se duniya me aaya hai aise hi hai sala,tension hi dekhte hai is ke face me.
Sachin:ni aisa kuch ni hai.
Meghna: aur mere face me..
Sachin: tumhara face mujhe mere behan ki yaad dilata hai.
Meghna: me tumhare behan hi hu? Tum batao vivek.
Vivek: tumhare chehre ka charm mera to dil hi legya.
Meghna: so sweet of you..
Aasna:golu kaha hai dekh ni rha
Vivek: hoga kahi akele baitha hua..

Aasna golu ko dekhte hai akele baitha hua..
kya kar rhe ho akele yaha?
Golu: kuch ni bas yahi soch rha hu ki duniya kitne chote hai ek dusre se phir mila dete hai kise mood pe.
Aasna: ha ye to hai, waise kya karte ho tum?
Golu: I m an engineer, and you?
Aasna: me doctor clinic chalate hu apni.. koi Girlfriend hai tumhare?
Golu: (haskar) ni
Aasna: so kal jalde utna hai bye good night.
Golu: Good Night

{Next Day}...
sachin: chalo yar utho trekking karne k lia ready ho jao.!!
TREKKING KRTE-KRTE:-

Aasna: hi so kaisa lag rha hai trek karna.
Golu: Nice nd u
Aasna: me 2 ..thanx
Golu:kislia,
Aasna: agar tum ni hote to me yaha ka khubsurat nazara ni dekh pati.
Golu: koi ni , mujhse dosti karoge,
Aasna: q ni zarur.
{Phir ye dono ek dusre k bare me baat kare hai.}

Vivek: beer pite hua ,aaram se babydoll agar tum kuch ho gya to mera kya hoga?
Meghna: tum yaha aram kar rhe ho sab aage ja chuke hai humse..
Vivek: koi baat ni tum ho na mere saath .
Meghna: chalo phir!!!

priya: sachin tum bahut sweet ho, kitne innocent,cute ho tum.
Sachin: (sharma ke) waise tum bhi bahut khubsurat ho.
Priya: thanx .

Scene at top of the hill.........

Aasna: Wow..!! kitna khubsoorat lag rha hai .
Golu: Ha.., [Aasna ko dekhte hue] bahut khubsoorat hai.
Aasna: Really thanks ! For this wonderfull moment .
Golu: Thanks to mjhe tumhe kehna chahiye, that you are here to share this moment with me.

Vivek: Agar tum logo ka thanks hogya ho to chale?
Sachin: Bhaiji chalo yar bahut thand lag rhe hai.
Golu: acha to chalo..

Scene At the Camp........

Vivek: hey meghna agar tumhe thand lag rhe hai to kya me kuch help kru tumhare..
Meghna: acha.. to batao kya kroge.
Vivek: Aise cheze to practical hi samjhaye jati hai.
Meghna: Hmm...

Priya: Sachin tum apne bare me batao kuch.??
Sachin: I am an engineer .., aur yha apne dosto k sath Bachleor life enjoy krne aya hu, And what about you?
Priya: I am a fashion designer..,, Bas kuch collection dekhne ke lia yha aaye thi.
Sachin: So are you in a relationship with someone?
Priya: hmm... Well abhi tak to ni and you''
Sachin: Ni kbi time hi ni mila in sab ke lia..
[they both spend tym while asking about themselves]


Aasna: ye batao tumhari aj tak koi girlfriend ni rhi kyu.?
Golu: matlab
Aasna: ni .. I mean that tum well settled ho dekhte bhi ache ho to aj tak single kyu?
Golu: Aisa ni hai that I never crushed with someone.
Aasna: really
Golu: I love a girl but ye bat usko pta ni
Aasna: aisa kyu
Golu: Batane gya tha usee par wha pata chala ki wo Delhi shift ho gye so we never met again.
Aasna: Kabse pyar krte ho usee...,
Golu: Jab se usse mila hu use pal se, par ab shayad lagta hai ki mil hi jayegi.
Aasna: my good wishes are with you.
Golu: thanks and tumhara.
Aasna: Ni proposal to bahut aaye par aj tak wo ni mila jo chahti thi.
Golu: Kaisa Ladka chahiye tumhe.
Aasna: Na hi koi hero nahi koi millionare. Bas ek sweet simple ladka jo mujhse pyar kre ,mjhe smjhe aur mera saat de for whole life.
Golu: [man hi man muskurakar sochne lga ki iske requirements me meri entry to ho gye]
Aasna: chalo sojate hai Good Night.
Golu: Good Night.

Part 2 will come soon.





-----DEEPAK.. 

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